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Animal’s story
On day when I was home whit my dog and my horse. We wanted to go out in the snow, my dog Zorba loved snow. There was 1 meter snow, I ride my horse and Zorba ran at my side, it was cold outside, I had my snowsuit on and my biggest boots on, so I don´t felled cold, my dog love the snow when I troughed it after him. We had fun and I laughed at me horse big steps. But then a bird fly up in my horse face and he jumped very high up in the air. I fell off and my horse ran a way, my dog follow whit my horse, so I called my neighbourand asked her about her had seen my horse and Zorba. She said that she hadn’t seen my horse. I began to cry I was so miserable, but then I got a call from a lady there had seen a big black horse whit a little dog following. She said that she had tried to stop them but she couldn’t. The lady also said that they run back that way they come from. So I breathed a sigh of relief, that they don´t ran over the big road, but I called my dad and said what there was happened, he said that he willed came so fast I could to see if Zorba and my horse was okay. I got a very big shock, but after a few minutes I sited op in the horse and ridded out in the snow again, but this time I was more careful and I had my saddle on o it will be so easy to fell off again, this time my dad said that he will love to take pictures of me out in the snow, so he got some very good pictures when my horse and me in the snow.
I was a little bit scared of what there was happened but I stilled ride on my horse and I´m very to have my own horse and I don´t think that I never will the afraid of horse it is one of my favorite animal because you don´t have to talk to it but It stilled understand you, if your are sad the horse see it and then it is nice to you.