engelsk resume, hjælp! {{forumTopicSubject}}
Hej! Jeg er ved at skrive en opgave om Jakob Ejersbo's "Eksil", og her skal jeg lave et abstract/ engelsk resume. Det er dog noget tid siden, jeg afsluttede engelskfaget, så jeg er lidt rusten...
Derfor har jeg lige brug for lidt hjælp til rettelser og eventuelle justeringer af det:
Eksil is a novel from 2009, written by Jakob Ejersbo. The novel is about a young English girl named Samantha, who lives with her family in Moshi, Tanzania. For Samantha, life isn’t that easy. She doesn’t feels like she fits in anywhere. She is English and white on the outside, but speaks Swahili and has lived in Tanzania since she was three years old. At home there isn’t much help to ask for. Her mother is always drunk, and her violence father is never at home. She is on her way becoming an adult, she has a tremendous appetite for life, and an urgent need for evidence of life, especially to feel that someone really cares about her. She needs an adult who can tell her what to do, without any expectations to her. She has a lot of things to struggle with and she spends a lot of time during drugs, alcohol and sex. These bad habits starting to fill out more and more in her life and she ends up being her own worst enemy.
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jul 2006
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Her VIOLENT father (i violence er begrebet vold og violent er hvis man er voldelig)
She is on her way TO becoming an adult (du manglede bare lig et TO for at det giver mening)
She has a lot of things to struggle with - jeg ville nok sige: she is struggling with a lot of things. Men så vidt jeg jeg kan se er der ikke noget grammatisk forkert i din sætning
She spends a lot of time DOING drugs... (during betyder imens eller igennem)
These bad habits ARE starting to fill out... (der skal være et ARE når START er bøjet sådan)
Det var dem jeg kunne finde
engelsk resume, hjælp!
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