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Hej HGer
Jeg er igang med en engelsk stil skal være fantasi, men kan ikke finde en overskrift. I må også gerne sige jeres mening om den, kom også med råd hvis der er noget der forkert
Den er skrevet i datid og i jeg person
Ret gerne mine fejl, men ingen hård kritik da der er 2 gang jeg skriver. Den er ikke afsluttet og det bliver den ikke da den skal slutte åbent.
Her er den.


Chapter 1
For 9 years ago a little girl name Elena kotter and her mom and a dad lived in a small town call Grand dad, but then a vampire came and said that the little girl should go on a school in a magi world. The little girl begins to cry the vampire ask about what she name was and his personal identification number was, the vampire also said that Elena should be a great vampire. Then the vampire took home to the magic world
Chapter 2
One day I was going to school. I was going alone to school all my friends was not there to day. Normal we were 23 I my class but today we only was 15. I don´t think that they all was sick, but maybe they bunk off. I was there the hole day and they don´t came later, so the rest of the day I make my school work. After the school I go to shopping and after that I go over to my best friend, she name is Rebecca Smith but she was not home. So I go over t my favorite restaurant Maggis and ate pizza and drink cola. Then I was finish and I will go home, but a man came in front of me. He said that I should pull in the big branch. I do it and then there came a door, I opened it and I came into a magi world. There were dragons, vampires, werewolf and wizard.
I go on a road until I came to another man said” go over to the castle and find the headmaster, and said that you are new and you should have a room”.
The man was following me op to the headmaster. The headmaster said that I maybe could be a vampire, a werewolf or a wizard and I ask about why I don´t could be a dragon. If I should be a dragon I must be a boy.
If you should be a vampire there are a few demands: you should be strong and stomach the smell of the blood.
If you should be a werewolf you should have a nice body and could take a joke.
If you should wizard you should have love because for the right magic there is love in it.
Elena goes on her room and fined clothes she could go to school, she has a room and in the room there was a cat and a dog. In every room there was a cat and dog.
The next day was Elena ready to go the magic school; there were boys and girls in different ages. She fined his classroom, in the classroom there were girls and boys at Elena’s age. They all talk about what they would be, Elena fined a group of girls and they say hallo and talk further. Elena ask the girls what they would be, The blond girl say that she would be a vampire, The ginger haired want to be a werewolf and the last girl want to be a wizard. I said that I want to be werewolf, and my fur color should be black.
Then came the teacher he’s name was Jake. He was vampire, he was the vampire there had said to Elena’s parents that she should come on the magic school. In this lesion they had about have to be a werewolf. Elena thinks now that she not should be a werewolf but now she would be a vampire.
After the school day Elena got a new friend her name was Sophia Whit and she was 12 years old. They talk about what they want, but then one of the other teachers come in and said that they should go to bed because the clock was 23.
The next day the two girls go over to the big hall and eat breakfast, in the big hall was all the people and then Elena saw a very hot boy, he was going over to Elena, and said that she could get some of his breakfast, because he want to talk whit her. They go up to his room, Elena ask him what his name was and hi said that it was Eric. He asks her about what she wants to be. Elena just said that she want to be a vampire or a werewolf. Then Elena asks him what he wants to be, he want to be a werewolf and he wants Elena in his pack, and then will they be a perfect match. She kissed him and she whispered in his ear yes I wants to.