Engelsk? :D {{forumTopicSubject}}
Hey. Så skal jeg have hjælp igen.
Det er en ret lang tekst - ja, faktisk et referat af en film. Det eneste jeg skal bruge, er:
- Nogle der kan rette de <b>grammatiske</b> fejl. Altså evt, stavefejl, eller forkert opbygning af sætninger.
- Ord der kunne skiftes ud med et andet, vil også være praktisk
Trainspotting is a Scottish film from 1996. The main characters in the movie, is Mark Renton, Spud, Sick Boy, Tommy, Begbie and Diane.
The film begins, when Renton and Spud run down a street. Then we are introduced to Renton’s friends: Sick Boy, Spud, Tommy and the sociopath Francis Begbie. Sick Boy is obsessed with Sean Connery Films, and he and Spud are also into drugs. But Tommy and Begbie are clean. Tommy play football and Begbie drinks, and want to fight.
Renton decides to quit heroin. But he has to retrieve two rectal suppositories from a grotty toilet, before he lock himself into a room, and went cold turkey. He still has a temptation after drugs, when he stays off heroin.
Begbie throws a glass off a bar balcony, and hit a woman. After that a fight starts. Renton and his friends go to a dance club, and all five are in pursuit of sex. Tommy and his girlfriend Lizzy, take home for sex. They discover that their porno video of themselves is gone. They don’t know that Renton had previously stolen their film, so Tommy believes he returned it in the rental store. Lizzy and Tommy’s relationship ends. Spud gets drunk, and when he wakes up the next morning, he founds out, that his girlfriends bet is full of his own defecate. Renton get home with a young girl, called Diane, and they have sex. The next day, he discover, that he is in her parent’s house, and Diane is a schoolgirl, under the age of sexual consent. He tries to get out of the relationship, but she threatens him to stay, and if he doesn’t do that, she will call the police.
Sick Boy, Renton and Spud decide to get back on heroin, and they take whatever they can find. Even Tommy takes heroin now, because of is breakup with Lizzy. After some weeks, Allison screams. Her baby daughter, Dawn, is dead. Especially Sick Boy is very sad, because he was the father. Then Renton and Spud are stealing from a shop and run down a street, like we saw in the beginning of the film. Spud gets to jail, and Renton’s gets to a rehabilitation.
He goes back to the flat, and takes an overdose, and get on the hospital. After that, his parents take him home, and lock him into a room. He has several hallucinations. When he is clean of heroin, he visits Tommy, who is dying of AIDS. Renton moves to London, where he gets a job, and save up money. But Begbie and Sick Boy need a place to live, so they move in. They hear about Tommy’s death, and return home, where they meet Spud, who is out of prison.
They found out, that they have e chance to earn a lot of money. They could buy two kilos of heroin for £4,000 and sell it for £20,000. The four meets a professional heroin dealer, and sell the heroin for £16,000. They turn into a pub, where Begbie get into fight. His friends try to stop this, and Begbie slices Spud’s hand open with a knife.
Renton has decided to steal all the money for himself, and now he founds out, that his mates, isn’t his mates at all. The next morning, Renton takes all the money, while Spud is looking. Renton leaves. The final scene is when Spud finds £2,000 left for him by Renton.
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the film begins.
hellere skrive the movie begins.
det lyder bedre, og er grammatisk også mere korrekt.
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Engelsk? :D