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hejsa

jeg har en oversættelse fra dansk til engelsk.... men er bare i tvivl ang. grammatikken.... nogle der kan/vil hjælpe`?


oversættelse:

The Shining Mountain er et moderne eventyr om en far, der vil have, at hans datter skal være ligeså hårdfør, stolt og stærk, som han er. Hun må ikke være ligesom de andre almedelige piger i Skotland. Hun skal være usædvanlig. Pigen er bange for at skuffe sin far, der er en berømt bjergbestiger. Da faderen tager hende med til the Shining Mountain, fortæller hun ham derfro ikke, at hun er bange og træt og svag. Til sidst, da bjerggudimdem får faderen til at tro, at ham har midstet sin datter, fordi hun var bange for at skuffe ham, forstår han sin fejltagelse. De han bryder sammen og græder, skammer Pangma-LA sig ikke længere, og nu er hun ikke længere bange for at skuffe sin far.




Translation


The shining Mountain is a modern fairytale about a father, there wants, that his daughter to be just as tough, proud and strong, as he is. She may not be like the other ordinary girls in Scotland. She shall be unusual. The girl is afraid to disappoint her father, there is a famous mountaineer. When the father take her with to the shining mountain, she doesn’t tell him, that she I afraid and tarried and week. At last, the mountain goddess make the father believe, that he had lost his daughter, because she was afraid to disappoint him, understand he his mistake. When he brakes dawn and cry, Pangma-La is not a shame any more, and now she isn’t afraid longer to disappoint her father.