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Rim/-små digte? {{forumTopicSubject}}
Da jeg ikke fik svar i sidste indlæg:
Nogen der ligger inde med rim/-små digte i stil med disse:
Øjne kan smile, munden kan le, men smerten i hjertet kan ingen se.
Tit øjet må tindre og læberne le, for at skjule det indre som ingen må se.
Behøver ikke være helt samme, men bare have samme budskab med smerte i hjertet
sep 2007
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Har mange digte, men ikke sætninger som sådan - men digte jeg selv har skrevet :o).
aug 2007
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sep 2007
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slå en skid, og lad den dale XD
Ej, sorry - kan kun fy-fy rim
sep 2007
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Yeps, har massere af heartbroken digte :o)
sep 2007
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where souls are sucked dry
and hearts are sold
You want to go nuts, scream and cry
Life is a bitch - and that's no lie.
Guys will use you,
dump you,
and forget you!
And later they'll act like they've never met you!
Friends can be there for you
day after day,
but when things get too hard,
they'll soon run away
It's like we all live in i giant machine,
where everyone has to be selfish and mean
Life is a contest, a game or a hunt
They'll all push you aside, to get what they want
You pick up the tricks as you come along
What doesn't kill you,
will make you strong
I've learned my lesson, as time has gone by
Life is a bitch - but so am I
sep 2007
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aug 2007
Følger: 59 Følgere: 54 Heste: 2 Emner: 272 Svar: 1.500
Krikken - Nogle du syntes er bestemt gode?
sep 2007
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jan 2009
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fx. Remember a m, remember a e and put them together and remember ME
sep 2007
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Har et par stykker, de er lidt lange og nok med stavefejl men du får dem :o).
I'm finish with you
You're out of my life
I don't miss you anymore
Not the same way as before
I've realised that friends means more
Than stupid boys without feelings
So go to hell, burn up and die
Because i don't want you
I'm stronger now
I've learned of my mistakes.
Haha' ! That's what i call ironi!
Hvor blev du af?
Du var der ikke da det gjorde ondt
Da hele min verden styrtede sammen
Du var ingen steder at se, kunne ikke finde dig
Det skete altid når det gjorde ondt på mig
Så forsvandt du, bare sådan pludseligt
Fortalte ikke hvor du forsvandt hen
Sagde ikke hvorfor du ikke var der
Og jeg tilgav dig hver eneste gang
Jeg græd mange nætter søvnløse
Min pude var gennemblødt nat efter nat
Mit ansigt var klistret af de 1000 tåre
Ansigtet var blevet sort af mascara
Øjnene tøre, de kunne ikke græde mere
Alligevel fossede tårene stadig ned
Det var lige nu jeg havde brug for dig
Men du var ingen steder at finde
Gang på gang håbede jeg på du ville være her
Men gang på gang måtte jeg se det i øjnene
Du var der kun i de gode stunder
Ingen steder at se når der galt støtte
Men jeg elsker dig jo!
Elsker du da ikke mig?
Du siger du gør, skriver det
Og virker så oprigtig imens
Men hvis du elskede mig var du her nu
Lige nu hvor jeg har brug for dig
Brug for at blive holdt om
For at få fortalt det hele nok skal gå
Nu er du her slet ikke mere
Ser dig aldrig, høre ikke noget fra dig
Så det her er vel enden, det er vel farvel nu
Glemmer dig aldrig, selvom du gjorde mere skade end gavn
Tåren der nu triller ned af min kind er pga. dig
Jeg håber du er glad nu, håber du er tilfreds
Farvel min ven.
You're slipping away from me
Not running
Not knowing it
I tried so hard to hold on
You where there when it was hard for me
Then you where gone?
I diddent hear a word
Diddent see a thing, a sign
Wish you could tell me you still where there
And i stil where in your heart
Life goes on
But my heart is still frozen
I made it through the first night
Then they started coming
Haunting me like i was a pray
They torned me apart
And drank my blood
Then they threw me in the river
I floated slowy
Everything was quiet
I saw you standing by the river
You saw me, and didden't do a thing
I was still alive, i could have been saved
But you diddent do a thing
Then it all faded to black
I knew it was over
Now i'm here
I don't know if its hell or heaven
Sometimes it look like one of the thing
Sometimes the other
It's like balancing on a very little line
Not knowing if your gonna die or live
Not knowing if your gonna go to hell or heaven
This is all because of you
If just you have been there.
If just you have known.
Tag en køkkenkniv.
Du ved sådan en rigtig skarp en, der knap skal røre huden før der er hul.
Stik den så i hjertet, drej den og vrid den til der er et stort hul.
Tag den så op. Hak så til så meget du kan.
Gentag, gentag og gentag til du ikke kan mere.
Til hjertet har givet op og er stoppet med at slå.
Så ved du hvordan jeg har det.
Lovesongs are driving me insane, they all talk about love, they are all the same
But listen up guys, heres a love story you've never heard that changede this girls life
Cuz' good lovestories are only stories which havent ended yet, look you should hear this shit
So to make you understand, i'll tell you a story about this man
He was living the wild life with all the girls, living high on the crazy world
Then the suddenly one day this girl turned up, made him give all up
Made him to the nicest boy ever, gave him a feeling that couldent get better
Promised her that he'd never leave, never let her be desived
She trusted him so bad, became so naive and believed in the bastard
One day he just said stop and walked away and she promised that she'd be okay
For sevarl months she was awake the whole night crying and was far from okay
She got depressed but she never got him of her mind, her light did never shine
He came back, lighted up her day - but again, from day to day he just went away
The person she was turned into was hard and cold and diddent think that the life had a goal
Did things that she werent supposed to, she crossed the line several times
That was the person he was turning her into, she only saw him, diddent find any new
She broke down from time to time, people thought that se was stronger but she couldent take it any longer
Now this girl is trying to tell her story, to make you other guys realise that you have to worrie
Look out for that guy who have taken your heart
Dont let him take over your life as it did to hers, more times than twice - this one hell off a guy
Trusting a person your soul who walks away, makes you go down in this deep hole
So now this girl has crossed the line, she went all down
Her heart is cold to anyone other then him , she wants to break free but she cant because off this ugly thing
This thing or two she got on her consciencens and yes they are all true
Those people she has hurt through time, she now cant get of her mind
All the things are forcing her to make all the lies, even though she know it's far over the line
Its like everytime she think its ending the flames flares up again - why cant it just dissapear like the wind?
She cant help thinking about how it could have been, if it wasent for her making those mistakes and ugly things.
The memories keeps haunting her, keeps rewiding her mind back to those times
Where he held her hand and told her how beautiful she where, despite she had not slept all night
And those time that he have sent her all up to heaven, with that adrenaline kick feeling
So can you now understand that love turns people into the ugliest things - all because of a man?
Meget lange, ja ;o). Når jeg endelig bliver kreativ og får lyst til at skrive så ryger der en masse ned.
jan 2009
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Skriv hvis du vil ha flere..
aug 2007
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Krikken - De er virkeligt gode! Tusind tak
Jacqueline - Sødt - Vil meget gerne have flere
aug 2007
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mar 2007
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tænker for længe.
jeg tænker på os og alt det jeg ville sige.
tænk jeg ku tænk hvis du
tænk hvis du tænker lige som mig.
Rim/-små digte?