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Da jeg ikke fik svar i sidste indlæg:
Nogen der ligger inde med rim/-små digte i stil med disse:

Øjne kan smile, munden kan le, men smerten i hjertet kan ingen se.

Tit øjet må tindre og læberne le, for at skjule det indre som ingen må se.

Behøver ikke være helt samme, men bare have samme budskab med smerte i hjertet smiley


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Kommentarer på:  Rim/-små digte?
  • #1   6. sep 2009
    Har mange digte, men ikke sætninger som sådan - men digte jeg selv har skrevet :o).


  • #2   6. sep 2009 Okay, har du nogen der omhandler dette emne? smiley

  • #3   6. sep 2009 Svale, svale - løft din hale
    slå en skid, og lad den dale XD

    Ej, sorry - kan kun fy-fy rim smiley


  • #4   6. sep 2009
    Yeps, har massere af heartbroken digte :o)


  • #5   6. sep 2009 The world is mad, cruel and cold,
    where souls are sucked dry
    and hearts are sold
    You want to go nuts, scream and cry
    Life is a bitch - and that's no lie.

    Guys will use you,
    dump you,
    and forget you!
    And later they'll act like they've never met you!
    Friends can be there for you
    day after day,
    but when things get too hard,
    they'll soon run away

    It's like we all live in i giant machine,
    where everyone has to be selfish and mean
    Life is a contest, a game or a hunt
    They'll all push you aside, to get what they want

    You pick up the tricks as you come along
    What doesn't kill you,
    will make you strong
    I've learned my lesson, as time has gone by
    Life is a bitch - but so am I smiley


  • #6   6. sep 2009 Sorry, den blev lidt lang - men synes den er så god smiley

  • #7   6. sep 2009 Tusind tak Dio, hvor er de dog gode smiley

    Krikken - Nogle du syntes er bestemt gode? smiley


  • #8   6. sep 2009 Hehe, tak tak smiley .. Er også helt vild med det sidste digt - det er en der hedder Terry (tror jeg) der har lavet den smiley

  • #9   6. sep 2009 Har nogle stykker smiley

    fx. Remember a m, remember a e and put them together and remember ME smiley


  • #10   6. sep 2009
    Har et par stykker, de er lidt lange og nok med stavefejl men du får dem :o).

    I'm finish with you
    You're out of my life
    I don't miss you anymore
    Not the same way as before
    I've realised that friends means more
    Than stupid boys without feelings
    So go to hell, burn up and die
    Because i don't want you
    I'm stronger now
    I've learned of my mistakes.
    Haha' ! That's what i call ironi!

    Hvor blev du af?
    Du var der ikke da det gjorde ondt
    Da hele min verden styrtede sammen
    Du var ingen steder at se, kunne ikke finde dig
    Det skete altid når det gjorde ondt på mig
    Så forsvandt du, bare sådan pludseligt
    Fortalte ikke hvor du forsvandt hen
    Sagde ikke hvorfor du ikke var der
    Og jeg tilgav dig hver eneste gang

    Jeg græd mange nætter søvnløse
    Min pude var gennemblødt nat efter nat
    Mit ansigt var klistret af de 1000 tåre
    Ansigtet var blevet sort af mascara
    Øjnene tøre, de kunne ikke græde mere
    Alligevel fossede tårene stadig ned

    Det var lige nu jeg havde brug for dig
    Men du var ingen steder at finde
    Gang på gang håbede jeg på du ville være her
    Men gang på gang måtte jeg se det i øjnene
    Du var der kun i de gode stunder
    Ingen steder at se når der galt støtte

    Men jeg elsker dig jo!
    Elsker du da ikke mig?
    Du siger du gør, skriver det
    Og virker så oprigtig imens
    Men hvis du elskede mig var du her nu
    Lige nu hvor jeg har brug for dig
    Brug for at blive holdt om
    For at få fortalt det hele nok skal gå

    Nu er du her slet ikke mere
    Ser dig aldrig, høre ikke noget fra dig
    Så det her er vel enden, det er vel farvel nu
    Glemmer dig aldrig, selvom du gjorde mere skade end gavn
    Tåren der nu triller ned af min kind er pga. dig
    Jeg håber du er glad nu, håber du er tilfreds

    Farvel min ven.

    You're slipping away from me
    Not running
    Not knowing it
    I tried so hard to hold on
    You where there when it was hard for me
    Then you where gone?
    I diddent hear a word
    Diddent see a thing, a sign
    Wish you could tell me you still where there
    And i stil where in your heart

    Life goes on
    But my heart is still frozen
    I made it through the first night
    Then they started coming
    Haunting me like i was a pray

    They torned me apart
    And drank my blood
    Then they threw me in the river
    I floated slowy
    Everything was quiet
    I saw you standing by the river
    You saw me, and didden't do a thing
    I was still alive, i could have been saved
    But you diddent do a thing
    Then it all faded to black
    I knew it was over

    Now i'm here
    I don't know if its hell or heaven
    Sometimes it look like one of the thing
    Sometimes the other
    It's like balancing on a very little line
    Not knowing if your gonna die or live
    Not knowing if your gonna go to hell or heaven
    This is all because of you
    If just you have been there.
    If just you have known.

    Tag en køkkenkniv.
    Du ved sådan en rigtig skarp en, der knap skal røre huden før der er hul.
    Stik den så i hjertet, drej den og vrid den til der er et stort hul.
    Tag den så op. Hak så til så meget du kan.
    Gentag, gentag og gentag til du ikke kan mere.
    Til hjertet har givet op og er stoppet med at slå.
    Så ved du hvordan jeg har det.

    Lovesongs are driving me insane, they all talk about love, they are all the same
    But listen up guys, heres a love story you've never heard that changede this girls life
    Cuz' good lovestories are only stories which havent ended yet, look you should hear this shit

    So to make you understand, i'll tell you a story about this man
    He was living the wild life with all the girls, living high on the crazy world
    Then the suddenly one day this girl turned up, made him give all up
    Made him to the nicest boy ever, gave him a feeling that couldent get better
    Promised her that he'd never leave, never let her be desived
    She trusted him so bad, became so naive and believed in the bastard
    One day he just said stop and walked away and she promised that she'd be okay

    For sevarl months she was awake the whole night crying and was far from okay
    She got depressed but she never got him of her mind, her light did never shine
    He came back, lighted up her day - but again, from day to day he just went away
    The person she was turned into was hard and cold and diddent think that the life had a goal
    Did things that she werent supposed to, she crossed the line several times
    That was the person he was turning her into, she only saw him, diddent find any new
    She broke down from time to time, people thought that se was stronger but she couldent take it any longer

    Now this girl is trying to tell her story, to make you other guys realise that you have to worrie
    Look out for that guy who have taken your heart
    Dont let him take over your life as it did to hers, more times than twice - this one hell off a guy
    Trusting a person your soul who walks away, makes you go down in this deep hole
    So now this girl has crossed the line, she went all down
    Her heart is cold to anyone other then him , she wants to break free but she cant because off this ugly thing
    This thing or two she got on her consciencens and yes they are all true
    Those people she has hurt through time, she now cant get of her mind
    All the things are forcing her to make all the lies, even though she know it's far over the line

    Its like everytime she think its ending the flames flares up again - why cant it just dissapear like the wind?
    She cant help thinking about how it could have been, if it wasent for her making those mistakes and ugly things.
    The memories keeps haunting her, keeps rewiding her mind back to those times
    Where he held her hand and told her how beautiful she where, despite she had not slept all night
    And those time that he have sent her all up to heaven, with that adrenaline kick feeling

    So can you now understand that love turns people into the ugliest things - all because of a man?

    Meget lange, ja ;o). Når jeg endelig bliver kreativ og får lyst til at skrive så ryger der en masse ned.


  • #11   6. sep 2009 en tanke og et smil kan flytte mange mil, men et kram og søde ord, kan gøre mere end man tror!

    Skriv hvis du vil ha flere..


  • #12   6. sep 2009 Dio - det kan jeg også bedst lide smiley

    Krikken - De er virkeligt gode! smiley Tusind tak smiley

    Jacqueline - Sødt smiley - Vil meget gerne have flere smiley


  • #13   6. sep 2009 Krikken - Har du skrevet det hele selv? smiley

  • #14   6. sep 2009 jeg tænker for meget
    tænker for længe.
    jeg tænker på os og alt det jeg ville sige.
    tænk jeg ku tænk hvis du
    tænk hvis du tænker lige som mig.




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