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det er ikk fordi jeg tror der er nogen der gider læse det, men hvis du keder dig vil jeg blive glad for lidt hjælp. jeg stinker til engelsk :s

The missing Santa Klaus.
Once upon a time there was a very big end very old man called Santa Klaus. Santa Klaus was a very high and a very fat man. He was always dressed in green clothes and black shoes. Every child in the whole world loved Santa Klaus, but only at Christmas time, the rest of the year was nobody thinking of Santa, and that makes him very sad. Only at Christmas time was Santa happy, but the rest of the year was he sad. Nobody thought about him in the summer, and nobody sent him letters or drawings like they did at Christmas time. Santa started thinking about why he was so alone in the summer. Maybe the children only liked Santa when they know they would get a gift, and Santa could not give the children a Christmas gift in the summer. Santa did not like the thought that the children only like him because of the gifts, so one year he did not give the children any gifts. That Christmas was a very bad Christmas, and the children were crying the whole day. But now Santa knew that the children only liked him because of the gifts. Santa had no friends, nobody liked him when he did not give them gifts. And that made him very sad, so he stopped being Santa Klaus and changed his name to Klaus. But no Christmas with out a Santa Klaus, so the children’s parents started “playing” Santa Klaus, and they gave the children gifts. Coca cola could see that Santa was very popular so they “bought” him and changed his green clothes to red. Now the real Santa Klaus was forgotten, and many children stopped believing in Santa Klaus, they never saw his sleigh or reindeer because it was only the real Santa that could fly with reindeer.
A little boy with tinsel tresses was a very big fan of Santa Klaus, and every night he was sitting in his bed looking out the window and waited for Santa Klaus, but he never came. The boy’s parents told the little boy to go to bed, and they said that Santa would not come when he was awake. The little boy wanted to see Santa. The parents thought that if the little boy just saw a bit of Santa Klaus then he would maybe go to bed. So the father bought some Santa Klaus clothes and hided it in a drawer, the following night he would take the clothes on, and then he would let the little boy see him. The night after the father was wearing Santa Klaus’ clothes, and gave the little boy a gift, but the little boy followed Santa Klaus, and suddenly he saw that it only was his father, and he put the clothes in a drawer. The little boy was very sad for a long time, because he really thought that he had seen the real Santa Klaus, but it was only his father. NO SANTA KLAUS. Nobody believes in Santa Klaus anymore. Now you maybe think “what about the old Santa Klaus, the real Santa Klaus?” and yes what about him? Nobody knows. I think that Santa lives in Greenland with all his reindeer. And maybe he has and wife, and a lot of children. Nobody knows. But is there really a Santa Klaus in Greenland, and is it right that he hates children, because they only like him because of the gifts? And has there ever been a Santa Klaus? I do not know, what do you think?