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dem der har tid og vil hjælpe. vil i ikk være søde lige at kigge min engelske tekst igennem og rette små fejl, hvis i keder jer :D:D:D

Father and son love each other, very much.
Mother and father are gone from each other and the father has his son living.
They are very happy of each other. The picture they are on their way to fine dining with his father's family. A very fine and rich family whose son has not seen much of, so now it's time he will meet them all.

Father loves to take him with all sorts of places, especially hunting. They love to go hunting together. In the forest on land- or field areas.

They always have good shoes on, so they can go far without getting hurt and of course they also have guns with.

They will never come home without a catch. The picture they have just shot a pheasant in a field- and land.
A proud son and father.

The weather is very good that day. It’s a beautiful day and usually if they have agreed to take on the hunt and the weather there is or becomes bad, they usually drop the trip or postpone it a few days until the weather gets good again.

Beyond that, if a little small cold, it is important to have warm clothes on, so they can keep warm and not freeze.

They've both always wearing a hat, so they do not get the sun in his eyes. They almost always have their hunting dog, is watching.

They almost always have their dog. We cannot see the animal in the picture, because the dog has run away.


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  • #1   16. nov 2011 Altså dit sprog er ikke helt flydende, så hvis jeg skulle rette den igennem efter mit eget sprog ville den blive meget anderledes. Men jeg kan godt prøve:


    The father and son love each other, very much.
    The mother and father are not together anymore and the son is living with his father.
    They are very happy. On the picture they are on their way to a fine dinner with his father's family. A very fine and rich family whose son they haven't seen much of, so now it's time he will meet them all.

    The father loves to take him to all sorts of places, especially hunting. They love to go hunting together. In the forest on land- or field areas.

    They always have good shoes on, so they can go far without getting hurt and of course they also have guns with them.

    They will never come home without a catch. In the picture they have just shot a pheasant in a field- and land.
    A proud son and father.

    The weather is very good that day. It’s a beautiful day and usually if they have agreed to take on the hunt and the weather there is or becomes bad, they usually drop the trip or postpone it a few days until the weather gets good again.

    Beyond that, if a little cold, it is important to have warm clothes on, so they can keep warm and not freeze.

    Both of them always wears a hat, so they do not get the sun in their eyes. They almost always have their hunting dog with them who is watching.

    They almost always have their dog. We cannot see the animal in the picture, because the dog has run away.

    Der er ikke så mange gramatiske fejl så det er jo godt smiley Men mange af sætningerne er svære at forstå, så jeg har prøvet at rette dem til det jeg tror du prøver at fortælle smiley Kig den lige i gennem og så om du kan bruge det.. Held og lykke smiley

    Sophie


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